8 chapters · 21,300 words · 8 characters in play
at Ch.8 — Convergence
avg 2,663 per chapter
2 appear in 60%+ of chapters
Energy falls 3 points from "The Spire Ascent" to "Undercity Revelations". A transition scene could smooth this.
Marcus Hale hasn't appeared for 4 scenes. If they're still in the story, readers may lose track.
Tomas Reyes hasn't appeared for 5 scenes. If they're still in the story, readers may lose track.
The Archivist hasn't appeared for 4 scenes. If they're still in the story, readers may lose track.