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Generate a prose opening from The Drift, 3 cast members, Surreal, tempting, dreamlike mood
Kael's backstory states he was fired from the Memory Crimes Division in 2089, but the World Timeline document places the MCD's founding in 2091. He cannot have worked at a division that didn't exist yet.
The Archivist is referred to as "elderly" in the Scene 5 notes but described as potentially being a "collective consciousness" in the entity description. If The Archivist is a collective, "elderly" doesn't apply. If individual, their age should be consistent.
In Scene 6, Tomás "finds" Kael after the memory wipe attempt, but there's no established reason for Tomás to know where Kael is or to be looking for him. Their relationship needs a connecting scene or mention.